If you want to blame someone, use the active voice. ("Betsy left the shrimp salad out in the sun for three hours, rendering it rancid.")
Passive: "The ambulance was called."
Active: "Betsy called the ambulance."
By using the passive voice in a memo, you are admitting guilt. Much better to just write the sentence straight on, and take what comes.
(c)2014 Suzann Kale
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